होती है जलन । इस कविता पर अपनी राय दीजिए की आप क्या सोचते है।
जो देखू उड़ते परिंदे तो होती है जलन जो सजाए कोई ख्वाब पहनाए खुद को ताज तो होती है जलन पंख मेरे भी पर उसने से हूं डरता जो चिढ़ाए कोई परिंदा तो होती है जलन।
- Praveen
- 01 Jan
- 2 Answers
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It's beautiful. But the relevance is lacking.
But remaining is goodModal content
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